Wonderful feedback, Daiyus, thanks.

Good spot on the Mon meeting reference. Realistically there’s very little chance I can reorder the scenes there (the ordering does a lot of heavy lifting for the transitions and flow), but I’ll see how explicit that reference is and might make a light trim if I need to.

Speaking of the pacing of Andor getting off Ferrix and to Niamos, you’re right in that those events happen fairly quickly onscreen and do cover a lot of time. That’s how it was in the original (episode 7 covered a lot of in-world time), and I think I’ve improved it further since we have more of Syril moping at his window (among other things!) in this section to imply days passing, but do you reckon it lands OK this way?

I’m really glad you’re enjoying it, and look forward to releasing the final versions!