i will go through these new versions as they come out. 😃

s01e01:
The first scene with the Inquisitor and Vader needs a better transition. The close up shot of the inquisitor builds up to his eyes being revealed, but because of the very sudden fade out that reveal does not have enough room to breath. I would either give they “eye reveal” a bit more time to sink in or just show him from the back, not cutting to the close up of the face at all. (which would make the last scene the first time we see his face, which would be kinda neat)

The scene with Ezra returning the lightsaber and joining the crew also needs a bit more room to breath before it cuts away.

Last small thing: around 12:00 there is an establishing shot of the full city that goes by way too fast. I would either take that out or prolong it.

All in all, a very good job, the rest flowed wonderfully. 😃