You know what, since it was brought up, here’s the work I did on the final Vader scene that I ended up cutting. It’s not finished from an audio standpoint, but let me know what you think. If this is worth finalizing and adding back in, I’m open to doing that.
The idea was to remove some of the dialogue and not have Vader get up from the gurney. I also used the French version of the “NOOOOO” as I think it sounds more anguished, and a little like Anakin’s voice is squeezing through.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PduGCkPUDS_pQDZbSXAmC70J8ENgbO24/view?usp=sharing