Very nice!
Also, a small sound tweak suggestion: On Passana after we establish the Knights of Ren in their cool but useless photo shoot, there’s a really atmospheric shot of the desert and the ship in the distance, which gets almost instantly ruined by unnecessary bickering about needing to find ‘a useful droid’. It would probably be easy to cut these lines and pick them back up with Threepio’s line about going back to the Falcon, giving us a few more seconds of sinister mystery to take in Ochi’s ship.