Agreed with everyone about the ghostly effect. A Force sound effect would be more appropriate there, just so long as we see it working before Rey starts to help.
Also, Maz saying ‘heal’ would be perfect, don’t know why I didn’t think of it 😉
The Han yell just felt a bit angry for that moment, and actually jarring. Maybe it’s also because I am used to the theatrical version with Leia’s soft ‘Ben’, but replacing that with an angry old man yell feels off.
Finally, I could try removing the medallion from the shot of her laying down, but that shot would have to break up the shots of Rey and Ben, which flow nicely together, and I don’t know if it’s worth intercutting that.