Love the opening logo and crawl.
There is a spelling error in the last word: I am assuming it should be trial, and not trail.
If this is Episode V, am I correct in guessing your Mando movies are episodes I - IV?
I’ve seen another edit where Baylan and Shin are already aboard the NR ship when it appears, and the fight is already underway. It works well and speeds things up in the beginning. Just food for thought.
Can’t wait to see the finished product!