I’d totally be down to try some of that Zorri stuff, Nev.
As for my previous idea, I just couldn’t help myself - https://youtu.be/MX-HgxqpIQI?si=PbzIctb6tFbibNqA
I believe Hal poked at the line “she still trained me” because at the time Leia would have seen her vision she would have still trained Rey for a year, meaning she couldn’t take back what she’d already given. To that, I say this - fine, delete that line as we currently have it. All Rey needs to say is “She didn’t tell me”.
EDIT: Just realized Rey’s second line could be dubbed over with “She still trusted me.”