Okay, test with the new line addition: https://streamable.com/akbkz1
(I also fiddled with the timing a bit on the last “Ben…” I think it flows a little more naturally now.)
Post #1566758
- Author
- sherlockpotter
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Untold (WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1566758/action/topic#1566758
- Date created
- 29-Nov-2023, 11:24 PM