I agree, one wouldn’t want too much exposition in such an emotional scene. That line addition sounds pretty good to me though.
Post #1566407
- Author
- ildiem
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Untold (WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1566407/action/topic#1566407
- Date created
- 26-Nov-2023, 9:13 PM