Damn I knew it was too long. Though I’ll stand by that I think it needs to get more specific to feel like a proper crawl.

FWIW, i was able to shorten mine to 90 words

It is a time of despair. Luke
Skywalker, sworn to rebuild
the legendary Jedi Order,
has vanished.

In his absence, remnants
of the fallen Empire known
as the FIRST ORDER have
risen from their stronghold,
Starkiller Base, to threaten
regions encroaching on
the fragile New Republic.
Funded in secret by daring
senators, General Leia
Organa leads a RESISTANCE
against the growing power.

Desperate to find her brother
and restore hope to the
galaxy, Leia sends her best
pilot Poe Dameron in search
of a clue to the last Jedi’s
whereabouts…