101 words is too many for a crawl. Ideally it should never reach 90 words as none have thus far.
I think what we have for the first two paragraphs has been locked in for a long time now. There’s really no sense in even touching those. As for the final paragraph, I actually appreciate how it mirrors The Phantom Menace’s crawl. Any additional links we can add to the prequel trilogy in this movie are very welcome because they clearly tried to distance themselves from those until IX.
Besides, as our good pal George would say: “It’s like poetry. They rhyme.”