The first episode is actually the one I want to mess with more, I realize I’m not really happy with it now that the dust has settled on just getting through the foleying and re-scoring of the whole 2 hrs+. I worked chronologically so a lot of it was early in the process and I wasn’t taking it seriously yet.

I think I should have the space now to polish it up, but the problems with that first act are honestly still the problems, unfortunately. I’d love to make some bigger changes for the next revision if you had ideas.