Jar Jar Bricks said:

Yes, this is the final crawl:

NeverarGreat said:

EPISODE VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS

It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, sworn
to rebuild the legendary
Jedi Order, has vanished.

With the Jedi now facing
extinction, agents of the
evil FIRST ORDER have
risen from the shadows
of an Imperial fortress
to claim supremacy over
all star systems beyond
the fragile New Republic.

Desperate for a hero to
help resolve this crisis,
the Senate has secretly
commissioned the pilots
of a brave RESISTANCE
to find the last Jedi and
restore the light of hope
to the darkening stars….

Isn’t ALL star systems just… a little bit too much, even for the First Order?
How about just “(…) claim supremacy over planets and star systems beyond the reach of the NR”?

Also, how about “striving” or “yet establishing” instead of fragile New Republic? Or just New Republic, really?