Just watched Ep0, was a nice edit and flowed well overall.

Only a few cuts/transitions were a bit rough:
11:40 - The Droids nearing the outpost get established in a wide shot, then it cuts to a close up of a droid being attacked. The cutting implies here, that the droid is part of the group established in the shot before, but that is not the case story-wise, which makes for a bit of a jarring edit.
23:20 - feels a bit sudden, especially the audio
29:01 - The characters jump right in front of the door from one shot to the other
32:27 - The two shots are too similar in their angle, it feels like a jumpcut.
35:40 - Audio feels a bit choppy
48:15 - Audio feels a bit choppy