Post #1564030

Author: vranir
Parent topic: The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1564030/action/topic#1564030
Date created: 7-Nov-2023, 7:24 AM

I prefer the total rewrite.

If you do use the first version, I would encourage you to lowercase “Starfleet” or change it to simply “fleet” to avoid crossing the vocabulary streams with a certain other universe.