Well there aren’t many commas in the second paragraph and those in the first are using them in the same manner/way that the final paragraph would be. So, if nothing else, it would make the sentence structure more rhythmic and almost poetic.
Post #1563967
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- Jar Jar Bricks
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- Date created
- 6-Nov-2023, 10:06 PM