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Post #1563958

Author
NeverarGreat
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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Date created
6-Nov-2023, 8:12 PM

I’ve changed it to ‘in’, but either way works for me.

Extra commas may be a bit more legible than no commas, but either way is grammatically correct I think, though I was trying to avoid them, however, because I wanted to avoid the dreaded ‘excess comma disease’ that tends to affect my writing, as this sentence so tediously demonstrates.