I would change “of the New Republic” to “in the New Republic”. There’s a very subtle difference there. Using “of” seems to imply that they are the main leaders there, whereas “in” could be any of the leaders regardless of status.
Post #1563932
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- Jar Jar Bricks
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- 6-Nov-2023, 3:56 PM