New Intro and Credits are very nice, “artwork” looks way better.
Thanks!
In the intro there seems to be a comma misssing after “clash” and I think on the 2nd page of text there are 2 different fonts used. Maybe the pace of new sentences appearing could be tuned down just a little as well, i feel like it is a bit fast.
Oh, so there is! Good spotting! I’ll fix that up when I get the chance.
The transition between stories is better now, i still think title cards would be better. 😃 See CWRefocused s02e07.
I definitely think functionally your suggestion is better however stylistically I think my approach is more effective.
If I had the opportunity to use extra title cards in other episodes I think it would definitely work the best. However, in terms of flow and expectations it’s a bit odd to have the second episode of a series setup a style of episode and never use it again.
Although, I’ll keep this suggestion in mind!
As always, keep up the goood work!
Thanks again! You feedback is much appreciated. 😃