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Post #1563545

Author
TheDimitrios
Parent topic
Star Wars Rebels Recut - A Fanedit TV Series
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Date created
4-Nov-2023, 12:39 AM

New Intro and Credits are very nice, “artwork” looks way better.

In the intro there seems to be a comma misssing after “clash” and I think on the 2nd page of text there are 2 different fonts used. Maybe the pace of new sentences appearing could be tuned down just a little as well, i feel like it is a bit fast.

The transition between stories is better now, i still think title cards would be better. 😃 See CWRefocused s02e07.

As always, keep up the goood work!