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Post #1562932

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TheDimitrios
Parent topic
Star Wars Rebels Recut - A Fanedit TV Series
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Date created
31-Oct-2023, 9:34 AM

Daiyus said:

I think my main feedback for the Familial Bonding episode is the jump between ending the Fighter Flight arc (which I like as is by the way) and moving into the Phantom scene is a bit jumpy. That’s where the episodes naturally break, but I don’t know if there’s some transitional shots that can be recovered from somewhere to link the two by showing the Phantom being launched or something in between? Maybe some kind of “onto the next mission” voice over?

This also pulled me out of the story a bit. Maybe a “Part I” and “Part II” Title card respectively?

That would signal to the viewer that these are two separate stories with a common theme and prevent that “wait, what happened?” moment when the episode switch happens.

Other than that, I really like what I have seen so far. The new intro is way better than the old one, not to say the old one was bad.