Right, I’m picking these back up for a polish pass, hopefully a final one. I don’t know if anyone’s had time yet to review the current versions but I’d love feedback if anyone’s had the time. I’ll probably edit in order of easiest to hardest - 1,2,4,3.

I’m interested in thoughts on shifting a little of the content in movie 3 (Narkina) around, as per a couple of posts above.

I know I don’t want to remove anything I don’t have to, but I’m thinking of cutting the shot from the very end of the second episode, of Andor walking on Ferrix directly toward camera as dramatic music plays, since that feels very much like a “we’re ending the episode here and it needs to be dramatic” shot, so even rescored it might land in that way and interrupt the smoothness of the transition? That said, I appreciate that it’s very iconic.