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NeverarGreat
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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Date created
27-Oct-2023, 10:37 PM

losthead said:

After each crawl, we still pan down through space, just to land on the next Star Wars logo, and the crawl begins anew

My current document contains over 400 permutations of the TFA crawl, so that would result in a 20 hour movie of nothing but slightly varying crawls, lol.

Anyway, yeah I think the crawl is basically there, since we’re now nitpicking very slight word choices. Funny enough, a few of my recent crawls did have ‘to claim’ but I just didn’t post those for some reason.

I do like ‘the light of hope’ instead of ‘a light of hope’, just think it rolls off the brain a bit easier.

EPISODE VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS

It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, striving
to reforge the legendary
Jedi Order, has vanished.

Emboldened by the Jedi’s
absence, soldiers of the
evil FIRST ORDER have
risen from the shadows
of an Imperial fortress
to claim supremacy over
all star systems beyond
the fragile New Republic.

Desperate to unite these
planets in RESISTANCE,
a courageous militia loyal
to the New Republic has
sent its pilots in search of
the last Jedi, seeking to
restore the light of hope
to the darkening stars….