Jar Jar Bricks said:

I think we were extremely close to the right one a few days ago. The following is mostly the same as Nev’s last post just with those minor adjustments I suggested:

Only nitpicks I have:

EPISODE VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS

It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, striving
to reforge the legendary
Jedi Order, has vanished.

Emboldened by the Jedi’s
absence, soliders of the
evil FIRST ORDER have
risen from the shadows
of an Imperial fortress
to claim supremacy over
every planet beyond the
fragile New Republic.

Desperate to unite these
worlds in RESISTANCE,
a fearless militia loyal
to the New Republic has
sent its pilots in search of
the last Jedi, seeking to
restore a light of hope
to the darkening stars….