EPISODE VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS
It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, sworn to
rekindle the light of the
Jedi Order, has vanished.
Emboldened by the Jedi’s
absence, agents of the
evil FIRST ORDER have
risen from the shadows
of an Imperial fortress to
conquer isolated worlds
beyond the reach of the
fragile New Republic.
Amidst this oppression, a
brave RESISTANCE loyal
to the New Republic has
sent its pilots in search
of the last Jedi, hoping
that his return can
restore peace and justice
to the darkening stars…
A few small suggestions/nitpicks
- The beginning of TLJ is a time of darkness after the New Republic is destroyed, I’d use despair here.
- Don’t call the First Order warriors. In a lot of cases, the good guys are called warriors.
- I don’t think the “mystical force” works well in the last paragraph. Keep it simple. 😃