So last night I was working on removing Hera and the New Republic from Seatos. Here is a proof of concept for the sequence from Ahsoka being pulled from the water to her departing in the space whale. There will need to be alteration of Huyang’s dialogue and removing the Ghost from a couple of shots. Thoughts?
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xTHdvaVItybDqsEHn8_BUZT3ahRPGEqG
In terms of the entire 17 min clip, I think in general there is a lot of lingering shots and extraneous dialogue that can still be trimmed to give it a tighter, more engaging pace.