The recolor here is excellent and works much better than the original- great job here.
I also like the removal of the facial expressions to minimize the cartoonish nature of the duel.
I like the removal of the dialogue with fake Kanan because it was just childish and added nothing. However, I feel it is a bit of an issue if we see Kanan just suddenly appear in front of Ezra. From Ezra’s perspective, it should come across as suspicious that Kanan, who was behind him, now suddenly appears in front of him.

I think you should include a second or two of fake Kanan approaching from behind without the dialogue and running in front of Ezra. That way, from Ezra’s perspective (and first time viewer) it would not be obvious that we are dealing with a force illusion.

Thank you for all the hard work you put into this and ongoing development.