Something a bit more short and sweat like this example for episode one seems more fitting…
"In a galaxy dominated by a tyranical Empires rule for 14 years, the Galactic Empires relentless expansion continues, subjecting countless systems to their oppressive rule.
On the distant planet of Lothal, young Ezra Bridger, orphaned after his parents were seized by the Empire struggles to survive through theft and scavenging.
As the weight of Imperial control bears down on him, Ezra yearns for liberation."
Thanks for the suggestion! I’ll keep it under consideration when I go back an adjust the audio 😃