It could definitely use some work, mainly with sound mixing and certain graphics, but what you’ve got shows promise! I especially like the Mando cockpit scene, the TIE cockpits, and the repurposed Falcon scene. It definitely makes the scene more impactful, but I think giving each character maybe a second more, and maybe making it so they can be heard more clearly, would give it so much more.

There’s also the issue that most of the Mando characters could be dead or have different ships or armor by this point, but obviously that’s not something you can control lol.