-Padme falls off ship
-Arguement with Anakin and, Kenobi
-They follow Dooku a little bit after
-Padme gets up while telling clone to get to the hanger
-They follow Dooku to the place that they fight
-Yoda asks for a ship
-The fighting
-Yoda comes they fight
-Padme arrives after the fighting
-The rest of the ending
Though for this edit it could go something like this.
-Padme falls off of ship
-Arguement with Anakin and, Kenobi
-Yoda asks for a ship
-Padme gets up saying yes to going to the command center(I have the audio for padme saying yes in that scene if Trooperman needs it.)
-They follow dooku
-fight sequence
-ending
Also, since I see that Trooperman is asking for more suggestions. One scene that's always seemed a bit ackward to me was, the one after the nightmare he has. Mostly because, he says "I'm sorry, I don't have a choice." After she already agreed to go with him. Plus, he's gesturing with out speaking in the middle. Mabye having him say "But, I have to go. I'm sorry I don't have a choice. I have to help her." Possibly using the fullscreen DVD to get more of a closeup on her when, she says "I'll go with you". Plus, since your dubbing Anakin, you could make him sound little more(just a little though) forcefull "I have to go. I don't have a choice. I have to help her."
Also, I really like the new look for the bar. It's much more crowded.
