I’ve had a good session this evening working on the single movie plan. I’ve now gone through all seven episodes and done a rough cut which came in at 2h 58mins, which is obviously too long with a 40 minute finale still to come. However, there is definitely a lot more than can be cut.
I then went back and did a more detailed cut of the first two episodes and I believe I now have a workable first act which allows the plot to progress quickly but maintains our character introductions. This comes in at 50mins:
Logos and crawl: 2mins
Episode 1: 34mins
Episode 2: 15mins
The main changes from the first cut are:
- Cutting the whole Ahsoka map sequence.
- Sabine now names the Denab system in the med bay as soon as Ahsoka asks her about the map.
- Re-inserted scene where Morgan sends Shin to Lothal.
So act 1 now plays out as:
- Rescue of Morgan
- Ahsoka and Hera on Home One.
- Sabine speeder intro & Ezra hologram.
- Baylan/Shin/Morgan at the temple remains - Shin sent to Lothal.
- Ahsoka & Sabine reunion on Lothal.
- Sabine takes star map and opens it.
- Sabine v Shin.
- Combined Medbay scenes - Sabine reveals Denab system to Ahsoka. Ahsoka leaves and Huyang persuades Sabine to re-start her training.
- Sabine returns to the Comms tower, suits up, cuts her hair and contacts Ahsoka.
- Morgan arrives on Seatos and opens the star map.
- Ahsoka collects Sabine and they jump into Hyperspace.
- The Final hyperdrive arrives at the Eye of Sion.
Act 2 is where a lot of fat needs to be trimmed and I’ll work on that this week after the premiere. I desperately want to keep the Clone Wars flashbacks but they may have to go 😦