Cool, thanks Jar Jar. Well to Hal or whoever it was, was it because of the way it fits in the shot? Or just the wording alone? I feel like it would still fit, but I think you could remove the word ‘lasers’ in order to make it fit if it just didn’t work. Just think “has been” makes the entire speech flow better… though I guess it is punchier without it. It also could just be a matter of delivery, maybe if it was just slightly slower. Idk.

EDIT: Honestly it does sound better on my phone vs my desktop. I have been listening to the same lines for hours so maybe I’m just a little over-sensitive right now.