I like everything you’ve got there, RL.
But I’d argue against modifying the crawl or making regular broadcasts of Finn and Poe. It’s quite clear toward the beginning that Poe really does have his doubts about whether everybody out there is ever willing to come together. Thus why it’s more impactful when he talks about there being “more of us” later on. Doing this would rob us of any really character development for him.