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Post #1555287

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NeverarGreat
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
19-Sep-2023, 12:51 AM

It does make sense in that case to keep the Wayfinder in the first Jedi Text scene, and does lead into the next scene of Rey telling Leia about it.

So perhaps we should move the Force healing illustration to another page. There’s one Rey turns away from right at the beginning of that first scene, which is a page with a cutout including some more text. We could just delete the text from that cutout and place the illustration there. It would fit better there anyway, and be in the center of the page.

The trouble with that is it becomes a very blink-and-you-miss-it moment, but that may be fine if there’s a line later referencing the texts as her inspiration.

The nice thing about that solution is that we never see that page again, as she turns to the Wayfinder from the other direction in the second scene.