I really like the line “The Final Order begins”. Since on this version we removed the 6 hour ticking clock this line serves to set the stage for the final battle, where the Sith Fleet is only now begining to mobilize, while they’ve been stationary through the whole movie. It also gives into the idea that Palps is moving his plan forward since Leia “disrupted” his scheme to take over Kylo. I don’t think it should be removed.

And I love these new Finn/Jannah lines from RL, I can’t believe I’m seeing a Finn in this movie that actually feels like he went through TLJ’s character arc.