The “And you” version I just slapped together quickly because the reading came to me. I’m curious if people would prefer that line reading if I nailed it down, or like the v1 line reading. Again, not based on quality but just the line alone.
EDIT: Also, is the new shot okay?
What is this “new shot” you’re referring to? 😉 Don’t tell me or it’ll stand out all of a sudden.
I think it would work really well with that line, if perfected. I like the idea that it’s the Force which is bringing all of these defected stormtroopers together to help heal the galaxy.