Great changes for V4! Exciting stuff 😃
I still feel we need one line from Palpatine though to help smooth over his change in target. I know it makes sense to us, but I feel a first time viewer would be slightly confused without the clarification.
How’s this?
“Long have I waited… for an heir to the Sith. The grandson of Vader was weak, but you are worthy, Empress Palpatine. You will take the throne. It is your birthright to rule here. It is in your blood, our blood.”