So yeah, here’s this:
https://youtu.be/3DCC0abhlw8?si=Ldy4RsWbMnQocf-EI think the first line sounds pretty good but the second one could be improved (or removed entirely). Really it’s only the first one that’s important.
This is one of the best ideas - it finally gives Finn the full circle of his arc that was so severely missing. It’s a shame there can’t be more than this but the fact it can now be here does something to at least round out his story.