Yeah, it’s the cruft that Hal has talked about. And I tried to use the same method I used to clean up Poe’s dialogue but it doesn’t work.
These are just some random lines I spat out real quick to test it:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/18R7jtXjYzgKaLAgMriWPk7Ku10rayCw_It’s something you might be able to get away with through the narrative filter of holograms or masks, like in Kylo’s case, but when they’re just speaking out loud it doesn’t hold up.
I hear what you’re saying. It honestly still sounds pretty good, although I believe you if you say it doesn’t match up.
I think the other issue is that McDiarmid tends to perform a bit more than the AI seems able to capture.