Yeah, it’s the cruft that Hal has talked about. And I tried to use the same method I used to clean up Poe’s dialogue but it doesn’t work.
These are just some random lines I spat out real quick to test it:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/18R7jtXjYzgKaLAgMriWPk7Ku10rayCw_
It’s something you might be able to get away with through the narrative filter of holograms or masks, like in Kylo’s case, but when they’re just speaking out loud it doesn’t hold up.