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Post #1553983

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NeverarGreat
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
12-Sep-2023, 1:02 AM

RogueLeader said:

I’m sensing a pattern with me spending a lot of energy on blink and you’ll miss it shots.

heal

If I need to make edits I can but here is the high res clip for now.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VorirravXQCUNYadlzaa-K9y9ZpMhRhc/view?usp=drive_link

Marvelous work! I salute you.

JEDIT: If I had a nitpick, I’d say that the dark figure is slightly too low on the page, leading to the horizontal energy link being slightly skewed downward. The only reason I mention it is because the viewer’s eye may not be drawn to the bottom of the screen quickly enough to absorb the image in this brief shot, so anything that could help bring the image higher in the frame would be helpful.

Note in my mockup the dark figure is quite a bit larger, due to the perspective:

Of course, the perspective is probably a bit too extreme here, and I like how your version is less distorted.