It’s a pretty good take, really. Just has that unavoidable cruft. Wouldn’t hurt to try it.
The “rotting clone” and “final lesson” lines both sound good in context.
Post #1553834
- Author
- Hal 9000
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 11-Sep-2023, 11:32 AM