Also, I do believe we can get Palpatine to say whatever we want now. Was there anything in particular that somebody brought up a while ago?
We can make Palpatine say anything now?
What about stream-lining the whole plan? Instead of sayin’ Kylo to “kill the girl”, he asks Kylo to bring Rey to him (later when Kylo says that Palpatine wants Rey dead can be read as a manipulation so she gets on his side).
I think it would work better for the movie if Palps already knew about the whole dyad thing, like the plan was to get Kylo and Rey together so he can suck them dry and come back to life. Maybe plan b was what he was trying to do with Rey, make her kill him etc.
About the “I made Snoke”, I always thought about how to abstract the “made” a little bit more. Maybe we could try a new line like “I made Snoke. As I made Vader. As I made you”
Also maybe review Rey and Palpatine dialogue at the end?