And here is the final lesson line in practice (it’s in the Drive now):
I like it! But, I’d suggest cutting out that “Rey” so it just goes like “Final lesson… [rest of dialogue]”. I think it would flow more better.
Post #1553455
- Author
- BrotherOfSasquatch
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- Date created
- 9-Sep-2023, 11:56 AM