Fair points, and I tried to minimize throwing in AI stuff that didn’t address existing problems. Leia’s lack of on-point dialogue being one of them, sorta.
What do you think of Poe’s AI lines in the briefing? I hope that to an unsuspecting viewer it would read as ADR that maybe wasn’t a dead match. Like an older movie. Like Star Wars even. Ultimately it serves a more important plot issue we created. And after a while it’s hard for me to guess how it’ll sound to someone who wasn’t agonizing over it in a NLE.
I agree with others that the delivery is a bit off, the A.I voice sounds a bit softer and higher pitched, though like you say the value it serves of reframing the Sith Fleet and introducing the underbelly cannons makes it a worthwile tradeoff. It’d be nice if it could be improved though, and RogueLeader’s tests are looking promising. His new Poe lines sound a lot closer to the original delivery.