I think that’s great, nearly perfect - I’d just question the word ‘desolate’, which implies that the worlds are barren and thus not particularly valuable for the First Order to hold. And what are the FO’s goals? Is it to destroy the Jedi? Or is it to restore Imperial rule? Or are they extremists seeking revenge?
Post #1551780
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- EddieDean
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- 25-Aug-2023, 3:16 AM