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Post #1550238

Author
Pagan Editor
Parent topic
SSWR's Attack of the Clones - Alternate Timeline Edit (WIP)
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Date created
11-Aug-2023, 5:49 PM

Seeing a new clip from you SSWR brings warm feelings to my heart. šŸ˜„

Have you considered cutting something in the shot of Mace defending Dooku? I just feel like he’s patronizing towards Padme. I would probably cut the last line, ā€œIt’s not in his characterā€. The longer that shot keeps going, the more smiling and patronizing he seems. Also, I think it makes him and the Jedi look dumb since we find out that Dooku indeed is involved.

But good stuff!