Post #1547244

Thanks for making these samples! I think for the sake of the scene, I would also re-do the “What could you give me” just so the whole thing fits as good as possible. And I think the reading of the “phantom” line just sounds more like Adam. Also, there is a sort of alliteration/rhyme with phantom and failed clone that makes the sentence flow nicely. This would be a great resource to have for other edits even if we don’t add it to Ascendant.