One observation, though; it seems as though you use a lot of hard cuts in your edits between scenes. Actually, all of them (I think) that you changed seem to be hard cuts. I'm curious whether this an artistic decision or an inability to do the soft transitions on your system.
If it's the latter, than if you were ever planning to do a revision of your edits, I'd be happy to do any transitions for you and put them up for download. In fact, I could do them for you now if you wanted...