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Post #1543518

Author
BrotherOfSasquatch
Parent topic
SSWR's Attack of the Clones - Alternate Timeline Edit (WIP)
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Date created
17-Jun-2023, 3:07 PM

SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

I’m fairly pleased with this FX shot I created. Ok, well, really I found some free stock footage and I pieced together…but it comes together pretty nicely imo. Hopefully, I can continue to get better with fx (why are they so hard for me?😆)

https://youtu.be/3i444Dqut-I

skip to the end to see it in context.😁

Decided to comment on here rather than on your videos like I usually do. Lol

Anyways, WOW. That is marked improvement over the original shot you had! It looks really great. The only thing I’d suggest is maybe adding in some more atmospheric elements into the shot (fog/haze, maybe even more rain, etc.) to help hide the “cut outedness” of Tipoca City and to make everything look more cohesive.

Other than that, nicely done!